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So-here's my first (and last -.-) english story!! It's completely in english!! But I tried to use words that nearly everybody knows!
 

Just a small preface:
 

Series: DBZ

Pair: Goku/Vegeta

Warnings: shonen ai, extremly sappy, romance (?)

Disclaimer: nothing belongs to me... T.T

Dedication: to everybody who reads this fiction ^^°°

Author's note: I liked to write such a (very) short story (in english...) -don't ask why... ^.^"" -my english is horrible, so please don't criticize me too hard -.-

-it's from Goku's point of view (told in the first person)
 

"Find to each other"

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It was not long ago when I fell in love with him. I still remember this time as if it was yesterday...
 

At that time I was alone...

No one of my friends was alive anymore.

I only had him.

It was not that I hated him or so.

I liked him, too. Even when he had a evil character, he was just a good person. I could feel it in my heart that only this was the truth.

But did he show it to anyone? No. Deep in his cold heart, there was light, but no one was aloud to get to this place. -Just I.
 

As we trained together as we always did, my heart began to pound very fast. It was not only in cause of the fight we had. It was just the feeling I had when I was near his body.

I couldn't beat him any longer. I never wanted to hurt him really...But there were years when I had to do it.

Since he saved my life, I couldn't be angry with him, even when he tried to kill my friends and my son.

He just laughed at me when I had lost another training fight. He supposed that I was not strong enough, but the true reason he didn't know -and that was actually better for me...
 

But then...

After two weeks I tall him everything.

It was just quiet hard for me to talk about my feelings.

He was surprised, but he didn't say anything.

I waited for a reaction. -Nothing happened.

I was by the way to stand up. I wouldn't get an answer -not the answer of course I wanted to hear.

His hand touched mine. I looked up into his eyes and they were not empty any longer. I could see into his soul. And I noticed fear, doubts, but also hope in it.
 

I gave him a cute smile and for a short moment I thought to recognize a smile on his face, too. It made me happy. And so I didn't think about it any more.
 

I kissed his lips for a few seconds and then I broke this soft contact.
 

He stared at me. I said nothing. I still looked down at the ground.
 

And then -he lay his head onto my knees an whispered:

"I love you, too -my dear..."
 

No minute later he was sleeping and I fell into a deep sleep, too.

-To dream of him -and his smile.
 

~The End~



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Von:  engel
2004-03-06T23:43:46+00:00 07.03.2004 00:43
Ya know, ya write english, ya get an english comment *g*.
It was great, most of all, 'cause i like english fics more than german. so, more of this, i luv your writings.
Von: abgemeldet
2003-06-08T16:40:00+00:00 08.06.2003 18:40
Das war super!!
Eigentlich hab ich mir vorgenommen, das Kommi in Englisch zu schreiben, aber das würd niemand verstehn!! *g*
Die Idee und wie dus geschrieben hast, echt toll!!! *begeister*
Von: abgemeldet
2003-04-18T17:03:06+00:00 18.04.2003 19:03
That was really great, I hope my english is not too bad for you to understand, so crazy someone is writing an English-one I hope you're doing this again, well you told before that you wont, but hey just do it ok? I'm begging you, please!!! Well I think you've written an excellent Story, so I try to give you hope for more of them, and because of that I wrote this Comment in English, not to threat you ok??!!!
Write more like this I love it and I can't wait to get more of it, you know that? Just like before, sorry for that but I'm a person, who is unabel to wait! So go on writing, please! *bringing some food to the author so she may go on sooner!*
Von:  MiSu
2002-11-03T13:00:03+00:00 03.11.2002 14:00
Soooo~ooo...ich komm endlich mal reingeschneit!! ^O^
Also, erstmal *lob*, dass du eine in englisch geschrieben hast!!!! *dich drück* Englische Ficcys mag ich besonders gern, und deine ist verdammt SÜß! *große Kulleraugen*
Allmählich mag ich dieses Pairing wieder...je mehr du davon schreibst...^.- Ehrlich, schreib ruhig öfter mal was in englisch, find ich genial!!

*Baba sag* *wink*

Mi Su ^.~
Von: abgemeldet
2002-09-21T15:58:11+00:00 21.09.2002 17:58
^_________________^ *strahl* ^_________________________^ (Bracht das noch Worter? Ich glaube nicht.) ^___________^ *knuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuudddelz* *mehrlesenwill* ^.~ ^____^


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