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Without you

So, this is my first real english fanfiction, I hope you'll like it.

Btw, there might be also some mistakes, sorry for that^^"
 

Disclaimer: I do not own One Piece
 

And now, enjoy^^
 

Without you
 

With eyes wide open, Ace lay on his comfortable bed in his room, feeling not comfortable at all, stunned from the thoughts he had. There was so much blood, so many friends that died only because of him. Who was he that all these people sacrified their lifes for him, to free him, save him. Yes, he was the second squad leader of a Yonkou, of the strongest man in the world called Shirohige. But hell, he was the one who caused all this, who made a terrible mistake and yet, everyone keps telling him that it wasn’t his fault. How could he believe that? He knew very well, if he just hadn’t gone to hunt Blackbeard or at least, if he had died while fighting that bastard, this whole war wouldn’t have started. So, you can easily say it was his fault, no matter what other’s say. Only he was to blame that - “Hey, what’s up? Ya know, you shouldn’t think about what happened, you couldn’t have changed it a bit, no matter how much you wanted it.” Marco said with a calm voice, seeing sadly how his friends condition was getting worse, and came, closing the door behind him, slowly to the bed. Sitting down next to the fire-user, he gently stroke his hair, trying to calm him down. “Don’t blame yourself, that would only destroy you.” Slowly sitting up next to the blonde, Ace looked at him, eyes full of grief and sadness. “But if I would have just take your warnings and – “ “Ssssch”, the older one whispered quietly, touching with his right hand his friends cheeks, stroking/caressing them. “As I said before, as we all did, it’s not your fault. We decided to come for you, ‘cause you’re one of us, a part of our family. And no matter how stupid you are sometimes, that won’t change a bit. We will always come for you, same goes for eyerone else of our family. So please stop blaming yourself.” He said that with such intensity that Ace could do nothing but stare at him and even as finally a few tears escaped his eyes, he seemed not to notice. But his friend did, smiling sadly as he whipped them away. “There’s nothing to worry about right now any more, ya know. You’ll see, eyerthing’s gonna be ok, just try. We miss you all, you know, the day you entered this ship, you entered our hearts as well. What would we do without you? What would I do?” The last sentence of his little speech was just a light whisper you could barely hear and maybe he (even) hoped that it wasn’t heard, that he hadn’t said that loudly. Well maybe, he thought, but as he looked Ace in the eyes, he knew it was right. These beautiful eyes the phoenix could drown in everytime he looked at them.

And eventually, two hearts that beat in the same rhythm found each other, ready to take the chance, the chance to start a new part of their life, together.



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Von:  Votani
2010-07-11T23:56:59+00:00 12.07.2010 01:56
Weiss ja nicht, ob du jetzt nen deutschen oder englischen Kommentar haben willst, weshalb ich jetzt dreister Weise bei Deutsch bleibe. :3 Schoener OS. Alle Achtung, dass du es in Englisch geschrieben hast. Es ist wirklich gut geworden. Klar und fluessig, obwohl du die ein oder andere merkwuerdige Wortwendung drin hast. Ausserdem hat man in Englisch auch nicht so viele Kommas. Da sind einige zu viel. Aber hey, nobody's perfect, right?
Das Pair ist uebrigens auch toll. Ich steh total auf Marco/Ace bzw. ich mag die beiden Charakter. <3
Von:  Chiruchiru
2010-04-11T20:32:12+00:00 11.04.2010 22:32
Awesome~♥
Von:  Sunny713
2009-12-15T17:24:05+00:00 15.12.2009 18:24
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cool
i like it
its really good
^^


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