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Title: Burning Souls (<- by MiSu ^^)

Part: 1/1

Author: Yuki-kon <Kageyami Yukito>

e-mail: doreen.ut@t-online.de

Fandom: Yami no Matsuei

Pairing: Tsuzuki/Muraki

Genre: poem (more or less...)

Warning: slash, rape (...somehow)
 

Note: I like reading comments of any sort - positive, negative, helpful, etc., if they are without flames *has a watergun* - and, of course- you don't have to write them in english ^.-
 

Disclaimer: nothing belongs to me -.-; , I only used the characters to write down my imagination and I also make no money with this plus the copyright doesn't belong to me *finsihed*
 

Dedication: I like to dedicate this story (or poem... or... whatever) to all of you who will read it - of course only if you want ^-^
 

Special Thanks: MiSu ^^ (thanks for beta-reading this story and thanks for the title *hug*)
 

Author's Note: my first "project" (<- what a word #.#) about "Yami no Matsuei"; it doesn't play at any special time

- Muraki is my most favourite character of YnM and Tsuzuki is the following one ^^' - and because of that, the two are my favourite pairing in the series (after them: Tsuzuki/Hisoka, by the way)

- just one statement: -Muraki rules!!!!!- ^.^'v
 

>><< Tsuzukis POV (the largest part)

**** Murakis POV
 

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"Burning Souls"

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>><<
 

I hate you

for what you have done to him

I want to

take revenge for this punishment

I try to

defeat you until it comes to an end

I will break you

there won't be a hideout
 

But why do you look at me, too?

You strech your arms out to the dark

and your hands will reach me

My body shakes when you touch my soul

You are as cruel as always

Why does it seem like you're much more?
 

When you talk to me I wanna answer you

When you look at me I don't know what to do

(It's so strange)

When you smile at me I wanna keep that smile

And when you're kissing me I can't hold back any longer
 

I hate you

for what you've done to me

I want to

be with you all my lifetime

I tried to

hide and draw back from you, but

I love you

even if you are my biggest enemy
 

Even now you're here

standing in the shadow of a cherry tree

It makes me remembering all the pain

you put him through

Even now you're smiling

looking at me with these cold eyes

I seem to notice a fire in them

- your soul, burning for my death
 

Come on

just go this little further

Let's start

I can't await it - dying in your arms

Only you

can free me - now that I'm your doll

I know

you're just playing this game to strike my soul
 

Your eyes shine

- two steps away

My heart beats

- a distance - nothing to speak of

You lay your hand on mine

- shivers that I get

My soul is crying

- a wish so unforgivable
 

I'm yours

I can't do anything against it

You're my lord

You can do everything with me

I'm lost

in my feelings for you

You're pure temptation

- the demon I've fallen in hands
 

>><<
 

****
 

It was a long way from hell to you,

but even if there was the pain

nothing could hinder me

to get back to this place
 

You're already there

- Did you wait for me?

I take a look into your eyes

- They tell lots of stories

Now I'm there

- Would you like to be my doll?

I can see it in your soul

- The fire burns in you
 

Let's play the game of love

Let's forget the time before

Stay with me

Only one night

I've been waiting for so long

for this moment to come
 

I wanna kiss you tender

I wanna touch you softly

I wanna take your love

I wanna take you deep
 

****
 

>><<
 

When you smile

you know I can't stand against it

And while your opening my clothes

you are kissing me

I can feel your heart

that is pounding like mine

But is it the same love

that is there in me?
 

I know you can hide your feelings,

but if it's more than passion

please show me

I know you're cold like ice,

but now it's so different

please tell me why
 

Am I a fool?

Is it what I want

or is it just what I get?

Are you that cruel?

Do you want my love

or do you just take what you need?
 

Kiss me

- your lips taste so good

Touch me

- your hands are all over my body

Love me

- let's become one

Don't stop

- I wanna feel you
 

>><<
 

****
 

I see your face before me

I see your emotions deep inside

I see your shining eyes

I see it all - I know: It's our time
 

There are no feelings in me

when I get you under my control

I'll take you hard and painful

like I always wanted to do
 

Even if you're screaming

even if you may cry

I ignore the stiches in my heart

and declare them as a lie
 

****
 

>><<
 

It hurts when you take my soul

- but no sound escapes my mouth

It burns when you move more and more

- but I try to feel your love
 

I gasp

- even if you hit me

I can't control

my passion that leads into ecstasy

I moan

- there's no emotion I can hide

I throw away

all my worries and my pride
 

>><<
 

****
 

I love your voice

when you shout out my name

I love the tears

that run down your cheeks

I love your eyes

when they show me who's to blame

I deeply look into those eyes

and also you can't stop your peeks
 

Just a little bit more

and I won't be able to hold it back

Feelings of heat, but also love

are overwhelming my inside

My body's shaking

and the explosion is not far away

The last kiss, the last noice

and then heavens doors are opening
 

****
 

>><<
 

The wave takes me with you

and together we are floating

through an upset emotional sea

Even if I can't believe what you're saying

I hear you whisper:

"I love you... for eternity"
 

>><<
 

~*~The End~*~
 

Thank you for reading this stuff.

How was it? I hope not too bad. In that case I would like to say sorry. I'm not an english genius (that's why I had a beta-reader ^^') and english poems are much harder than stories, so I beg you to forgive me...
 

Hope you will give me hints what I could make better in future.
 

See you in time.
 

Yours,

Yuki-kon

<Kageyami Yukito>



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Von: abgemeldet
2007-07-15T13:08:08+00:00 15.07.2007 15:08
It's so BEAUTIFUL!! *_*

you really have done a great job ;) I really love it! *-*
Von: abgemeldet
2004-06-05T18:33:02+00:00 05.06.2004 20:33
aslo ehrlich gesagt, habe ich keinerlei fehler gefunden und ich habe jedes wort verstanden...dies ist das beste gedicht (oder so was) was ich je gelesen habe!!! Es ist ja so genial...super arbeit!!!! Nea
Von: abgemeldet
2004-04-07T16:03:20+00:00 07.04.2004 18:03
Voll schön! ich hab zwar nicht jedes einzelne Wort verstanden(mein schlechter Wortschatz ^-^'), bin aber trotzdem restlos begeistert! Weiter so!

*knuddl* deine Calista
Von: abgemeldet
2004-04-07T10:43:02+00:00 07.04.2004 12:43
*sich MiSu anschließ*
FANTASTISCH *g*
Hab ich auf der ENS eigendlich mit dem gedicht eigendlich ein Komm geschrieben? *nicht mehr weis*
Egal...
Schlechte Kritik;
FREMDLÄNDISCHE SPRAAAAAAAAAAACHE *quiks*

alles andere fällt unter gute Kritik *smile*.

HDL^^
Bis bald oder später,nee?
~Wolf~
Von:  MiSu
2004-04-07T09:26:56+00:00 07.04.2004 11:26
Ja! Wheee!! *quietsch*
Ich liebe es immer noch! Sehr schöne Arbeit! ^-^
Und das Ende ist so supa süß! *schwärm*
*Yuki knuddl*
Hat mir sehr gut gefallen. ^^

*wink*

Mi Su


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